No. 76

Continuing the poetry publishing. Sometimes i get the feeling that all of this (everything i do online, not just posting these silly poems) will be used against me. It doesn't seem right. 


Anyways, enjoy. Modified: Thu 08 Jul 2004 07:23:12 PM EDT

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/1549396/1/Sleeping_Wonder (03-12-04)


There's one review by someone i don't believe i know, Aedyn Star (2004-11-24):

powerful. it reflect several things i believe in or feel myself. i really enjoyed this.

Sleeping wonder

Shattered hearts and tattered souls,

Awaken your resting mind.

Your sorrows come by fate,

As fate brings change,

And change with time.

What was, was,

And was supposed to be,

There’s no way to control the future.

You can waste your life doing absolutely nothing and prove nothing,

Or live it full and prove the same.

What you will do,

Will be done by you,

You have control on what is bound to happen.

The future is in the hands of all.

Believe and be strong.

Stand up,

And hold on,

Everybody falls,

Getting back up is what matters.

Live the life you were given,

As the gift it truly is.

Go where you can’t go,

See what you can’t see,

Do what you cannot do,

Feel what cannot be felt,

Be what cannot be.

Keep going,

Be yourself,

And be what only you can.

Your life was a gift,

As your presence is a gift to the world.

Life is just.

Balance is everywhere,

Hidden,

Periodically in plain sight.

Look to the sky,

See beyond the stars,

Look the world in the face.

Be free,

Feel what was put to feel.

Nothing happens by accident,

There is a reason for everything,

Don’t leave this world now just to see what is after,

Have patience,

Don’t rush yourself,

Live life full,

And share the same fate,

Destiny,

As all.

Awaken, sleeping wonder

Here's another happy *sarcasm* one. Modified: Thu 08 Jul 2004 07:30:38 PM EDT

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/1549462/1/Blade (03-12-04)

This has two reviews. The first is by another unknown individual, sunscraped. (2004-03-12): 

Very good, but the question still lingers... Were you depressed when you wrote this?
-LXS

The next is by Jazzy (2005-01-17): 

great poem! i love the way you made it rhyme. its very dark and angsty, its amazing flow made me feel all happy inside! liek when i say the word "wretched" hehee WRETCHED! heh...yah. right. anyway. super good poem! the last line gave me chills

“Blade”

Lay me down,

Ice cold blade.

My reflection soon to fade,

On the side of a crimson blade.

End my pain,

Sharp silver blade.

Lay me down,

To fall asleep,

And never awake.

I’ve waited forever,

But the circle goes on,

An eternal cycle,

Through eternal dawn.

Maybe when the pain is gone,

Maybe rain be cast upon,

Maybe not rain but tears be drawn,

But maybe when it’s all gone,

Then maybe I’ll awaken at a new dawn,

Of another dream of reality.

So lay me down,

And watch me drown,

In my swelling seas of sorrow.

Save me,

My dammed cold blade.

I've still got a lot to go. I think two per post is a good number. Not sure if that's the best for commenting on them but whatever. You non-existant readers can deal.