No. 83

I've got three reviews on this next poem. The first is by someone who i don't know and hasn't reviewed anything before.
LilLaTLuv (2004-12-06): "Hey!

Interesting. Weird. But interesting. I like it. Keep that kind of work up. The rhyming is right up my alley. Love it.

Luv ya,Tashi :)"
The next is also by someone i don't know, but they've reviewed me before.
sunscraped. (2005-01-08): "M, I like the metaphors and imagery... in some places, the rhythm is a bit broken, but other than that it is a wonderful poem.~!"
The last is by Jazzy (2005-01-17): "great poem. flows a little wierd at the beginning though..."

Modified: Wed 05 Jan 2005 11:03:12 PM EST
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/1776577/1/Silent_Sirens (12-06-04)

This powem was called "Listen" but i changed that.

Silent Sirens

Listen Listen, don’t you hear?

The silent sirens of a plane you can’t steer

So you’re set on auto-pilot

You have no knowledge

And therefore no fear

Of the collision course your set on

With those you hold dear

You ignorant fool

This fate draws quite near

Can you finally realize,

What you cannot hear?

Now take control

And don’t let go

For you are saved

Your withering soul

Set on the path

Nearly to down below

A fool you remain

But a fool that is free

Because you heard the silent sirens

Even though you're not me.